Athina Paris

Athina Paris
Let Your Dreams Take Flight

Friday 1 July 2016

Why do writers need editors?

It is true that most of us aspire for perfection, but obviously, hardly anyone can achieve it. However, repeatedly, things can be improved and anything between good and excellent accomplished, and this is often the case with anyone who has an artistic streak, but particularly true for writers.

We would all like to believe that our writing is flawless, our ideas unsurpassed, and our grammar impeccable. But reviews, evaluations, synopses, and anything else that places our work in front of strangers’ eyes quickly tells us that this is not so, that in fact, we have an overabundance of shortcomings. This reality check can produce a number of reactions in a writer. From the teachable, “I’ll keep trying until I get it right” to the hard-headed, “this is what I want to say, I refuse to change a single word”, to anything in between.

This is a truth. First, writers are driven to distraction by the voices in their heads, second, by the need to scribble words just about everywhere – serviettes, notebooks, receipts, strips of paper – and third, by talent. And just like any other artist, this talent needs to be honed, so that those scribbles can be turned into works that not only satisfy us but others as well, if our aim is to make them public. Think of the hours every musician, painter, sculptor and actor has invested in his craft. The same goes for writers.

Just as the musician needs a producer and an actor a director, so the writer needs an editor. Sure, there are prodigies and geniuses, but those are in the minority, and although there are writers who are competent at editing their own work, there is nothing like an extra pair of eyes for additional assistance. Whereas the writer is the creator of his own piece, an editor is the polisher, so see it as a partnership – the pot-maker produces the pot and another smoothes out the rough edges and varnishes it.

It is possible to edit one’s own work, many writers do it successfully, but they have learnt to separate the two activities/entities and discovered how to listen to the voice that makes the most sense. Yet, there is nothing like getting a second opinion, just as one would when confronted with a serious illness. Our writing is serious business, why would we not want to discover if there are plot holes, incorrect descriptions, character deviations, and setting muddles? Not to mention grammar and spelling anomalies. And do not imagine that anyone is above errors, because although good editors hold themselves to high standards and aspire to help produce as perfect a manuscript as possible, they too make occasional mistakes and inevitable slipups.

The writer and editor should be on an equal level regarding the story. What I mean here is; if you are a fantasy writer, look for an editor who is well-versed in the same, as the shared interest will be an advantage, although, an editor does not need to like your work to do a good job. But an editor who is familiar with the fantasy genre understands world-building, made-up terms and exotic life forms and steps in with his/her primary function in mind, which is to check spelling, grammar, and continuity, not to try change the storytelling.

Unless there is proof of plot loss, deviations and confusion, an editor stays away from the fundamental tale, merely there to guide the writer in producing clearer material. Conversely, having an editor does not mean you never read or revise your own work. Naturally, you should. Proofreading, typesetting, and doing basic edits is necessary to find those sneaky mistakes each writer tends to have difficulty with. Some can be excellent spellers but have a problem with sentence construction or punctuation and revision often brings these drawbacks to the fore.

As you can see, an editor’s duty is to ensure the quality of your work, and to suggest improvements where and when necessary. Many writers want to be in the business of writing and find it difficult to deal with the technical side of things; formatting, typesetting, grammar, spelling, dialogue… it can all sound like a foreign language. So this is where a close working relationship comes in. The writer must feel that the editor ‘gets’ him, and the editor enjoys a writer who welcomes challenges and is willing to accept a new perspective.

Being an editor involves more than having read many books, receiving a good education, perhaps also having taught, and including an excellent command of grammar; in other words, although all those are plusses, it is also a talent. Editing fiction entails knowledge of current trends and frequently countless years of writing as well, as many editors are writers themselves. I have often heard that writers are schizophrenics who self-medicate. Ditto for editors, as they often sit long hours into the night pondering the merits of A versus B, having conversations with themselves about a manuscript that would be equally excellent whether the protagonist went left or right.

Everyone feels that their work is better than someone else’s, unique, and that publishers and editors alike should realize it the moment it lands on their desks. There is fantasy and reality but some writers have not yet learnt to distinguish the two and react negatively when receiving a less than glowing critique. There is taste, preference and subjectivity but there are also ground rules and editors know how they apply to plot, language, tone, and the essentials that can make or break a book. Why then seek an editor and afterwards refuse to change anything? And suggestions are just that, they do not have to be followed. Ultimately, it is the writer’s prerogative to do as he pleases. To have the final say in what goes and what stays.

Overall, editors try to exercise good judgment, make helpful suggestions, and offer appropriate advice while keeping track of a writer’s preferred plan for his tale. A manuscript is sacred, and I never consider changing one beyond recognition. Instead, I see the opportunity to work with the writer as a time of creation, with the objective of turning it into a work that is concise, clear, pleasing, and possibly a great work of art.

I conclude with a quote from Dr Martin Luther King Jr. “Nothing in all the world is more dangerous than sincere ignorance and conscientious stupidity.” He may have been alluding to a political atmosphere, but it rings true for most walks of life, and never more so than when it comes to an artist’s content, as he often feel that no one can touch his ‘baby’, because his ‘baby’, is perfect.

Thursday 17 December 2015

Review: The Emerald Lady

The Emerald Lady The Emerald Lady by James L Hill
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

Mermaids, pirates and dragons; characters often used in fantasy literature. So how does one take a clichéd idea and turn it into something fresh?
If you are James L Hill, you create a new mythology replete with events so compelling that you will believe this is exactly how it was ‘before’.
First in the Gemstone Series, The Emerald Lady goes back to the swashbuckling era of heroes, heroines, and anti-heroes you love to see squirm when they get what they deserve.

The tale begins on a normal-enough laden ship about to cross the Atlantic; its cargo, timber. Having left too late in the season, it runs into a ferocious storm the likes of which the crew has never encountered and before the night is over there are only two survivors – Jeremy, the first mate, and Jack, a ship’s boy.
Being an honourable young man, who promised Jack’s mother to look after him while at sea, Jeremy makes sure the boy is safe on a raft before he himself loses all hope. But all is not as it seems in his dying moments.
His compassionate efforts have been witnessed from afar by a creature he does not believe in and as he finally lets go, Shera rushes in. All Jeremy sees in his drowning shadows is a shark about to end his life and heroically refuses to go down without a fight.

Shera has chosen to live a free and solitary life away from Usea Maya, where Rehema, reigns supreme, expecting complete loyalty. When Shera visits home to request aid to return Jeremy to the surface, the answer is ‘no’ and Rehema makes it clear to the assembled mermaids that they must steer clear of human contact and let the sea claim whomever it wishes.
Shera disregards the command and does all she can to save Jeremy’s life, but in so doing brings about consequences that sends three groups into world-changing events. For not only does she ignore the queen, she also inadvertently causes another sea creature’s death, and falls in love with Jeremy, a mere human.

Enraged, Rehema curses the lovers and upends all hope of there being a normal world. She begins to manipulate all things as she pleases and considers her right to do so and finally instigates the split a select few have been expecting for centuries.
James’ tone is rich and imaginative, fulfilling the need for excitement. His characters shine in their mesmerizing descriptions, creating an opulent world packed with both beauty and treachery. A world that is both real and fantastic. But let me not give too much away, read it yourself, and discover a new remarkable world that says, when is number two coming out?

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Friday 21 March 2014

Armchair Travellers


I am often asked how I write about places I've never seen. How do I know in which direction the river flows, if the cobblestones are russet red, and is the baobab 30 feet tall?
The answer is; I don't know all those things for sure.

Some of the places I write about are real, and those who live in the areas will recognize them instantly, but often, scenes come out of research I do as preparation, visual help to set the scene, and the rest straight out of my imagination.

People call this the armchair traveller.

Many of us are bound by various circumstances; a nine to five job, a full-time mom with no time to discover a Miami neighbourhood, or a night nurse who needs to sleep during the day. So although you hear it constantly that you should write what you know, another answer is this, don't be scared, make things up, but equally, don't take such liberties that people think your modern-day romance is set in another Miami on a different planet.

To write first-hand is clever enough, but to write out of what your mind processed and made believable, is just as smart. For the woman on location may be momentarily concerned with her skin and how it fares in the blazing sun, if the taxi driver will over-charge yet again, or if the calamari is about to revolt against her delicate stomach.

The armchair traveller on the other hand, has become an adequate student of information, sifting through paragraphs, descriptions, and essays on decor and architecture, navigating thousands of pictures and sometimes even maps and jungles.

In addition, if armchair travellers were not accurate substitutes, we would reject all historical novels off-hand.
So, for those who are concerned about the gnashing teeth of a critical public, do what I do, rename villages, towns, and cities. No one will be any the wiser whether Bellamar, Bellastown, or Bellasdorp are real.

Friday 7 February 2014

Patterns

Before I begin on themes and topics, I have decided to look at patterns.

According to wikipedia, a pattern is a discernible regularity in the world, or in a man-made design. And as such, the elements of pattern repeat in a predictable manner.


In other words, it exists everywhere in nature and in everything people do.


Other descriptions for pattern include; design, arrangement, method, sequence, system, formula, shape, guideline, example... you can see where this is going.


Although patterns are especially noticeable in math and natural sciences, I'm referring to writing, which is a science all its own.


Call it what you will, and tell me you don't follow a pattern, that you simply write what takes your fancy, but whoever reads, sees it.


Of course it's the story readers like, but that hidden sequence that is part of you will manifest and grab them.Which is why they end up preferring an author over another.


Every romance, mystery, fantasy, horror, and all other classifications have resolutions. They don't all have to be good, but something must change by the last page.


Tell me that is not a pattern right there.


Again, why did I choose this subject?


I have noticed lately that many writers seem concerned about not coming across as unique, of simply being lumped together with others in a particular category and therefore becoming invisible.


Uniqueness reveals itself in the telling of a story, not how it's structured, because every tale revolves around "meet", "lose", and "get", and it makes no difference what genre it is.


Take the top writers in the world. None is worried about proving his or her distinctness. They simply sit down, know the rules to writing well, and then carry on.

Friday 31 January 2014

Introduction


I am new at blogging.

I do not mean that I have never read any, which I do regularly, from able and professional writers, I simply mean that I have never written one myself.

Therefore, I have yet to develop a style, so this is my attempt at interacting with readers, new and seasoned, and bloggers of all types, and wait with bated breath for comments.

As I am a writer everyone suggested that I should blog about my work. I agree and disagree.

I will explain why I disagree first.

Don't you feel that some movie previews give too much information away? True, it's just a few minutes, but don't you often feel you no longer need to watch the film because you've already seen the best scenes? Therefore, why bother?

Given, movie people try to shroud their work in some secrecy, but sometimes they fail, and it's all out in public before the first theatre has been filled. Where is the anticipation, and excitement?

Why I agree and how I agree.

To create that very mystery I mentioned above, I should keep something of the content to myself, yet be forthcoming.

So I have decided to go about this in a different way. I will delve into the themes I write about and have discussions about those, instead of the story itself. This way, you'll know what I've written, but not how I've written it, and so possibly whet your appetite.

I will include excerpts at a later stage, perhaps after we have exhausted a topic, and you are free to make observations as you wish. All I ask for, is courtesy, even when we're losing our tempers. I know we can't all agree all the time.

Let me know what you think.